tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6867342523259046496.post636104334955217051..comments2023-06-09T03:25:35.892-07:00Comments on Hope, Loud and Online: National Poetry Month, day 7Hope Eveyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07207072401544928877noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6867342523259046496.post-18681869243304160612016-04-08T15:28:24.211-07:002016-04-08T15:28:24.211-07:00usually I'm pretty comma happy myself :) I wa...usually I'm pretty comma happy myself :) I was so focused on getting the endwords in place, punctuation went right out of my head. <br /><br />Thank for the feedback :) If/when I come back to this one, I'll probably use commas in those places. The form only dictates the repetition of the end words, and the 3-3-3-1 line format. I'm not sure if this or a villanelle is harder! Hope Eveyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07207072401544928877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6867342523259046496.post-91686382448665248072016-04-07T17:50:26.646-07:002016-04-07T17:50:26.646-07:00I would probably add a few commas, because I am co...I would probably add a few commas, because I am comma-happy, but I don't know if the format permits?<br /><br />(If so, "make good the inspiration, dear"? "it's mine, so isn't like the rest"? "When finished, then the draft will rest"? Pooosssibly "Until I'm done, I cannot rest"?)<br /><br />But, as said, I do love my commas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com